Friday, February 8, 2019

Direct vs Indirect Quotations

  
LEO: Literacy Education Online




 A quotation is a reference to an authority or a citation of authority. [A local blogger or a friend’s opinion is not an authority to reference.  Academic sources need to be used to support your writing.] There are two types of quotations: direct and indirect.
direct quotation uses the exact words of authority and must be identified in your paper with quotation marks and parenthetical documentation.
An indirect quotation, or paraphrase, is a restatement of a thought expressed by someone else that is written in your own style that needs to be documented.



Know when to use quotations
·        Use quotations when the specific language of a quote is important.
·        Use quotations when accuracy is essential -- to indicate the writer's exact position.
·        Use quotations to support your argument, rather than relying upon someone else's words.
·        Keep quotes to a minimum. A short phrase or sentence is more easily understood than a long quotation.
·        Look for the "kernel" or the most important part of the quotation and extract it.
·        Paraphrase a quotation in your own words when possible.


Incorporating quotations into your paper

Combine a paraphrase with a quotation.
Original: Tania Modleski suggests that "if television is considered by some to be a vast wasteland, soap operas are thought to be the least nourishing spot in the desert" (123).

Revised: In her critique of soap operas, Tania Modleski argues that some view television as "a vast wasteland" and soap operas as "the least nourishing spot in the desert" (123).


Introduce a quotation by citing the name of the authority.
Example: Thoreau believed that "a true patriot would resist a tyrannical majority" (23).


Describe or identify the source of information if it is available.
Example: In The Coming of Age, Simone de Beavoir contends that the decrepitude accompanying old age is "in complete conflict with the manly or womanly ideal cherished by the young and fully grown" (65).


Use keywords from the quotation and make them a grammatical part of your sentence.
Example: As William Kneale suggests, some humans have a "moral deafness" which is never punctured no matter what the moral treatment (Acton 93).


Note: Overusing quotations can result in "patchwork" writing, a jumble of miscellaneous information from various sources that is merely pieced together. Quotations should fit logically into your text.  [See this link to go to a handout to understand how YOU—the writer—must lead the essay, and the sources are only used to defend what you have already argued.  Source material should be used at least once per body-paragraph; however, it is not used to ‘make’ the argument in the essay.  You must use appeals and logic to make the argument.  The source material is only used to lend support and credibility to what you have already asserted.]

Short Quotations
If your quotations are less than four lines long (which is usually the case), place them in your text and enclose them with quotation marks.
Remember to include a parenthetical citation for each quotation used. (The style of documentation used here is MLA.)
Example: Pearl, who is Hawthorne's symbol of truth, reaches a proportionately happy conclusion, becoming "the richest heiress of her day, in the New World" (243).
Example: Edward Zigler laments, "One finds violence, hostility, and aggression everywhere, including TV, the movies, and in many of our everyday social relations" (40).

Long Quotations
·        If a quotation is more than four lines long, set it off from your text by indenting.
·        Introduce the quotation with a complete sentence and a colon.
·        Indent ten spaces, double space the lines, and do not use quotation marks.
·        Do not indent the opening line unless the quote begins a new paragraph.
Example: Robert Hastrow sums up the process in the following passage, where he compares rays of light to a ball thrown up from the earth and returning because of the pull of gravity:
The tug of that enormous force prevents the ray of light from leaving the surface of the star; like the ball thrown upward from the earth, they are pulled back and cannot escape to space. All the light within the star is now trapped by gravity. From this moment on, the star is invisible. It is a black hole in space (65).

Final Reminders
Do not quote when a paraphrase will do. [You will rarely need to use a quote.  90% of your essay’s sources should be in paraphrased layout, not embedded as a direct quote.]
Do not cite sources for information that is readily available in popular reference books:
·        well-known dates and events
·        identities of famous personalities and politicians
·        familiar sayings
Always provide a context for your quotations -- explain to the reader why and how the quote is relevant to the topic.










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